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Re: Just Around, 'Til Tomorrow
I could really excited by the first stanza which I thought was pretty interesting and quick, but I dunno the poem felt like there could be more too it and ...
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Re: MARY - MAY OFFEND (Over 13 for language)
It was pretty funny, reminded me of an Ali G joke about Mary being a Virgin that I saw years back. Anyway it was a bit of fun and to ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: A bower in the Arsacides
Ooo nice haven't read poetry written in the style of Prose since my exam english couple of weeks ago, now that play 'Volpone' I didn't enjoy, this I did. Gorgeous! ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: The Sound of Strings (finished!)
Interesting to know which piece of music made you write this, but I suppose that's beyond the point. I enjoyed it, it was blissfull and quiet just what a poem ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: America's terroist policy...hypocrites?
What? So America shouldn't send back those who have killed for a fair trial. Even though we send over Al-quiada suspects for a fair trial, interesting that no-one has backed ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: Breathless
Well that history revision went well. I agree with Incandesence about the grammatical changes, but then I see your point about it beings yours so that weighs up. The imagery ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: Breathless
oh this was gorgeous, great imagery, I gotta run but I'll come back later and give this something more constructive!
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: America's terroist policy...hypocrites?
Right here's a pickle...... Considering America's consistent funding of the IRA (an Irish terroist organisation, which especially in the 70s was responsible for many bombs in civillian areas such as ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: The United Nations: A Failed Organization
Why was the UN not brokering peace in the Middle East, Vietnam, Korea, and Iraq? Middle East---> They're trying their best but if America and it's coalition keep insisting on ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: Abortion
For it being legalised, but I wanna see other people's opinions before I voice my own.
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: blue eyes
Wow I loved the first stanza, I'm a real sucker for short lines in poetry when describing beauty. It was weird, but the constant use of Ws, made me think ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: Emma's Work (PLEASE LOOK)
Hey, I don't know much about manga but I can see improvement in everyone of these and they're very pretty. My sister loves Anime and Manga and so we have ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: The Death Penalty (16+ for Semi-Graphic Descriptions)
Very interesting, you've got a really good tecnique for writing interesting non-fiction was is definately not easy. And although horrific allready your structure really improves the read. Thinking of
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: Alcoholics Anonymous
hey El, yeah she sent a long an email which was one of the nicest welcomes I've had to anything on the internet! Nate, hmm yeah. I miss everyone, i'm ...
Jan 29, 2005 -
Re: The Young Writers Club?
Really she hated it? Yeah it used to be fun, but I think as the world developed it stayed. Fond memories. Sad as I have had the most megabytes on ...
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