Midnight

Blood Bank came to school today, was finally old enough to do it and gave a pint. Really doesn't hurt most people should, you don't even have to look at ...

wow I wanna go comment...I will

drunk or maybe she's blow drying her hair!

hah! Aww now I see what happened...Jack tried to delete some at the same time. Aww well nothing great was said, I'll let the debate grow and come back and ...

Simple solid, very pretty............sheesh it's hard to give it a constructive criticism. I can see bits that need to be tweaked but i'm pretty sure you'll find them and mould ...

I dunno I think the ending is ok, I like this it's kinda nostalgic. See you've gone for emjambement often, when I dunno a poem like this could have closed ...

argh dunno what happens there. If a moderator could delete all of them apart from the one above that would be great cos I can't work out how to!

So much better then the first one! See this was the magic I was talking about. I'm tired and meant to be working so it's hard to be constructive, but ...

that's comforting :) ok points all taken on. Actually been doing loads of reviewing recently. Partly because i'm saving up for a dress hah!

I think some of the best poetry is a random story in poetry form but nevermind. Aww this was nice, I dunno I was drawn to it, I do think ...

Hehe it's really good. I could never do that with the computer even though we have paintshop pro. I espeically like the way you did shadows and the fact that ...

Argh it's so hard when you can't hear the music. I like them, I know it's ska but I could imagine Busted singing something like this. But still it's fun ...

I thought it was interesting, I think I assumed it was a metaphor for a relationship because if it was straight story it was a bit too quick to be ...

You're a great writer, i've been keeping an eye on your other stuff. I didn't like this one though. For a war poem it felt a bit too hooray i'm ...

These were really good although for most of them you'd need a tiny waist to carry it off. Which unfortunately alot of wome aren't blessed with. Anyway still really good ...