MiddleEarthGal

Wow, this is a really good piece of work! The only critique I have to offer is where you put, " took a long weighted drag.". I don't know anything ...

I LOVED this!! I was laughing so hard!! Way to describe all the flavors...Now I'm craving ice cream... Keep up the good work! Like I said, I was nearly dying ...

Wow, that was so sad, yet so good! I liked how the patient was so calm, even at death's door. I still felt sorry for the poor guy, though, and ...

Awww!! What a wonderful poem! I really like it! :D

One word: Cool! I really like them all!!!

Very pretty! I really like them!

Ooooh!!! I LOVE it!!! Seriously, that's really good. I love how witty the main character is!

Oooh! Way to leave me hanging!! I only noticed a few errors. "What if they get back soon, but?" - I think maybe you mean 'But what if they get ...

Once again, very well done! There weren't any spelling mistakes, but, the part where he walks into the stable, and you wrote, "He was greeted by a gentle whicker and ...

I loved it! I can't help but feel sorry for Ellie as she realizes the girl won't be coming, then super happy for her when she wakes up and sees ...

Alright! Here's chapter two! I don't know why, but I'm more nervous about this chapter than I was about chapter one. --- Sherry had seen her friend turn around, and ...

Wow! That's really good! I loved the descriptive words, it all painted a very clear picture in my mind. The only thing I noticed was: “take that hangdog look off ...

Cool! I like how it has the blue tinge to it. I've always been a fan of 'eye pictures' especially animal eyes! :D

It was really good. I agree with the above writer, except, maybe instead of taking out the sentence just take out 'pub'. There was only one spelling mistake that I ...

Nice! The room mate reminds me of me in the morning. LOL I only noticed a few little things, but, for the most part, it was hilairious! I am thinking, ...