MiddleEarthGal

I only noticed a few little things, otherwise this is just pretty darn awesome! I think you meant 'Rear-view' mirror instead of 'Review' mirror... Jagger was about to ask him ...

Oh my word, Red! Now I simply *have* to join ya'lls 4-H! My cousin, also known as our pastor's youngest daughter, is sitting next to me, and we were both ...

I can't believe I haven't read this yet! I loved all the descriptions, especially the dress. Oh, how I want that dress! LOL And the strange, starry-eyed boy intrigues me, ...

Wow! I really liked this piece of work. :-) It explains writers block very well. I've experienced this very feeling abunch of times...

I love all the colors! And the colors reflecting on the water are simply breathtaking!

It's so pretty! I love the focus, and the colors! I hope they have a wonderful life together!

Nice chapter! I felt sorry for the prince when he was reciting all of the books and music. XD The only thing I personally didn't like was when you wrote ...

Woah... This chapter really threw me for a loop! (In a good way!) I really was shocked when the King said that Isabel would marry the Dauphin. Let me know ...

Nice job once again! I love the relationship Isabel and Charlie have, and the bet they made had me laughing! ;) I know this is going to sound weird, but, ...

I didn't know you had posted more of your story!!! :D I really like this chapter, and I'm SO going to read the next ones A.S.A.P. ;)

Very nice! I really like the suspense. Here's my few critiques: 1-"On the age of thirteen, Hannah started to have strange dreams" - Shouldn't that be, *At the age of ...

Ok... I liked it, and how the dialouge is, but maybe to double the length you could add more details. Like where you put "They walked side by side through ...

Very nice! Way to leave me hanging! The only things I noticed were: It was rather long, but it kept me interested through the whole thing. :-) Where you put ...

Very good poem, with a very good message! It was a bit short, but hey, you were ten! That's better than I can do now! (I'm not any good at ...

Wow...Just wow... The only thing I personally didn't like was the language...The foul words weren't in the books, but that's just me. But, it was very funny!!!