Micman

Question what do u think of the story besides what i need to edit. Does it attract you? make u want to read more? or does it bore you, so ...

Good job this being your first poem. the poem really shows me just how you feel about this person although, i do see some spots were it need improving but ...

I am not going to critisize your spelling, although i can tell you are from england. I was very intrigued with the story. it had a very interesting opening that ...

i like most of thius story and i look foward to finding out what happens next

It is a cold Friday morning exactly one week from graduation at Blankton high school. Chemical sciences is my first class of the day, I have been waiting all semester ...