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Re: My heart
The "again" at the end of the poem got cut off or you just... accidentally skipped the "n" at the end? But other than that it's very lovely. Sad. But ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: "Things I Don't Like" by Death
Oh wow. This totally made my day :) Funny. Really, extremely, funny. I loved it :) (Especially the last one)
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: A Heart, a Soul
A heart, a soul, from somewhere near I wish for what I cannot hear I bear the thought that's deep inside That sometimes one can never hide. This heart and ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Kinzee's Aweomsetastic Place To Tell you stuff about Her
"All of our goats are prettier than most goats are" yeah, that's not biased or anything ;) lol
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Of Science Fair Projects and Names
DUDE!!! Addy, how do you get so many stinkin' reviews? Stinker. Aaand naw. Naw you got that wrong. "There" is for "It's over there" and "their" is for "It's their ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Of Science Fair Projects and Names
A young girl, with eager blue eyes, and wavy blond hair, stared at one of her class-mates impatiently. "It's... Good, Lisa," her class-mate replied. The young girl, Lisa, frowned slightly. ...
Mar 25, 2011 -
Re: Passing
I liked this. I also liked the way you described how panicked she was. I almost had a panic attack with her! :O Lol
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Mirror: Chapter One
“Not everything is fun and games, you know,” Kailee repeated to me for the tenth time that morning. “I know that. I'm not saying anything about fun and/or games.” “Don't ...
Mar 22, 2011 -
Re: Me or him.
This story was honestly one of the best short stories I've ever read. Though I haven't read many ;) I really love how she didn't choose one guy (though I ...
Mar 14, 2011 -
Re: Flicker Divide - prologue
TWELVE?!?! YOU'RE TWELVE ?!?!?!?! Oh my. I am seriously impressed.
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Flicker Divide - prologue
I think this story is starting out very interestingly. I liked how you started with the story of how it all started and how two people were telling the side ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Mirror prologue
“What's with you and these crazy ideas?” “Haha, you're like some sort of fairy tale!” “Calm down! Stop twirling around every which way.” Kailee, my sister, I wonder... What would ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Regina and the Seven Giants - Chapter 1
Bekah! This is so good :) I can't wait to read the rest of it! It's very well written and even though it's written in a formal way, it seems ...
Mar 12, 2011 -
Re: Paper Flowers
I almost cried! She pushes me away when we hear the child cry. "Damn kid," I growl, leaning back in the chair as she rushes off to soothe the child's ...
Mar 11, 2011 -
Re: Truth or Fear?
I think this was very well written and entertaining. Though I don't exactly understand what's going on. Why did she have to change? And what happened that forced her to ...
Mar 11, 2011
