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Re: Corrupt a Wish [3]
Granted, but you're sent to the special-class. I wish Team Pink would win at the end of the month! >:D
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Ban the User Above You [6]
Banned because you're right.
May 2, 2011 -
Re: Unfortunately; Fortunately
Fortunately I don't know what that means! :D
May 2, 2011 -
Re: The Family Feud: Chapter 2
Okay this was way better with description, that's for sure! :) but sometimes the descriptions you used didn't quite make sense..... Like this: And my hair is a very dark ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: The Family Feud
Okay. I see that you have some extremely thorough reviews here, so some of (or all of) what I'm about to say may be a bit redundant. Overall, I really ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (9)
Holy crap! That chapter is really long! :O It's like amazingly freakishly long! Pahahaha but this time I didn't feel like jumping ship, so it was okay ;) I was ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (8)
The White Swan, fearing that it would bleed and turn into a Black Swan, hovered over her and said, “Oh, please don’t shoot, lady! I shall do whatever you ask.” ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (7)
Oh gosh. This chapter was entirely about horrible things! I hate that land lady matron person. Couldn't she tell that he was sick and dying?! Is she really that thick?! ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (6)
Oh gosh, Snoink. You have absolutely no trouble with disturbing stuff, do ya? Hahaha man. Reading about that tailor was extremely awkward. Every single time you mentioned something about "measuring" ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (5)
Dawww this is really sad!! :( I almost cried and I felt so bad! I loved the jail scene when Granid saw Solea for the first time. Even though you ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (4)
Oi. This one has a lot of reviews so there's a chance that every thing I say is redundant and unnecessary, but oh well! :) There's one thing that kind ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (3)
WOO I'm back! :3 Waaaaa I knew it! I knew it, I knew it, I knew it!! I was acting like I was watching a horror movie! "Don't go in ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (2)
Waaaa! So long. This one DID take a half an hour to read! It did, it did! Holy crappers.... I really liked this though >.< it was vurry good! I ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Swan Song (1)
Okay. So first, I almost died! XO this chapter was so long it might have taken me a half an hour! Though I wasn't paying attention to the time so ...
May 1, 2011 -
Re: Like a Prince - Chapter 2
Having awoken early in the morning before the intended time, This sentence seems awkward. Try rephrasing it. Ryiiko, the thief, it seems like too much when you put "the thief" ...
May 1, 2011