Mickeystwin33

NOTE: This is actually my story. I went through this, and would not wish it upon anyone. I thank you all so much for reading this. You've picked on me ...

This is an amazing poem, you have captured every aspect of what happened that day. It is so symbolic to so many people and you just made it simple and ...

This was so sad, but it proves so many good points. People will go so far because of envy, and they don't realize the consequences. It is an amazing piece, ...

Hello CreativeFreak, This is a good start, but you are right the ending needs work. Maybe you could write about how they wish to be free of their life, or ...

I loved this poem. I wish i couldn't say this, but I can relate so much. You don't realize what it feels like until your the one crying, and scared. ...

I'm not very good at reviewing, but I loved your piece. It almost made me cry. I'm not good at harsh criticism, and that is what writers need most so ...

This is my first review so it's probably not very helpful. I loved your poem especially the quoted line. all she wants is to fit. every girl looks at her ...

Hi, I'm kinda new, and scared. I've had this account for about a month, but could not remember my password until now. I'm not quite sure what this website is, ...

It was just a tree, A big tall beautiful tree, Stuck between two countries. Who started fighting, For this tree. They started with words, Then a fist, Then the guns, ...