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Re: Harry Potter, Voldemort and a cookie.
That is hilrous. (Sorry the spellcheck's not working) I thought it was really cute and funny. Though it would be nice to know how Hermonie showed up at the end, ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: stones and little bird bones
This poem is amazing. I love this poem. It was a bit confusing at some parts what you where talking about. I think that you should look a bit more ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Will review almost anything!
I you could please review this I would be so grateful. I already got two reviews on it, but no one is telling me what I want to know. Its ...
Nov 27, 2010 -
Re: A speech on bullying
The city of Mentor, Ohio was voted one of the “100 best places to live” this year by CNN and Money magazine, however four teenagers in this town did not ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Hate You for Loving You
I'm not very good at reviews yet, but I do know that this is an awesome poem. I loved reading, but I did notice a few grammatical errors. "Why? Why ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: The Writings of a Stereotypical Girl (Prologue)
I like this prologue, but it would be better if you could make a bit longer. You could foreshadow what's to come. I know you don't want to give too ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: Breathe Again...
I love this poem especially these last lines. "And so I take the words Take the lyrics Close the book Breathe again..." It was kind of confusing, but that's probably ...
Nov 24, 2010 -
Re: My Inner Child Ran Away :(
This story is amazing and so true. When you desperately want to hang on to childhood, you are forced to let it go. I wish sometimes we could go back ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Undeserved Salvation
I'm not sure what it's about, but I loved it so much. I especially loved your used of the font and color. It made it so much more interesting. I ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: I died with a smile on my face
You are an amazing writer, and this poem is awesome. I love it! It is rather long, and that effects the understanding of the poem a little bit, because it ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: I'm addicted to helping others.
It seems crazy doesn't it? That's because it is, but I only speak the the truth. I'm addicted to helping others. It seems great, like a wonderful thing, but that's ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Blind
I love this poem, because I know exactly how it feels. You want so deeply to understand everything, but yet you don't even understand yourself. You view yourself a second-best, ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Leader.
This poem is awesome. I love the message, because most people just don't understand how desperately others could use their help. We all need a leader to help guide us ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Silence
I love this poem. I love the message your trying to convey. It's about a person hiding in silence, because they are scared to speak. It was very confusing though. ...
Nov 21, 2010 -
Re: Hello everyone
Thank You all so very, very much. I can't believe that so many people would comment on a post made by me. You guys are all awesome. Some things more ...
Nov 21, 2010
