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Re: You are science.
This is an amazing poem. It is the first poem I've read on here and liked, because I finally figured out how too. It is definitely a great poem. I ...
Jan 17, 2011 -
Re: Why?
I loved this story.Great use of the language. I am a little bit confused though. Did she kill him? Did he kill her? Why is her blood all over him? ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Argument of the Fried Brains
I love this poem. I wish I could write something that good out of something like that, but I'm not that talented. I really like this poem, just because it ...
Jan 14, 2011 -
Re: Kindness Can Change A Life
There once was a girl, Scared of everything, She thought of herself, As a worthless void, She was bullied, By peers, And beat, By siblings. Her parents were gone, Both ...
Jan 12, 2011 -
Re: Does This Sound Cliche?
I wrote an Informative piece for my high school speech team. At the first speech competition I placed 6th, which is pretty good. I practiced really hard for the next ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: The Unnoticed
This is one of the best short stories I have ever written. I loved it, mostly because I am a person whose good deeds go unnoticed. I love the title, ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: An endless dream
Your story was great. It drew me in, and I could not look away. You are an amazing writer, and almost made me cry at the end. I didn't see ...
Dec 28, 2010 -
Re: an unrecognized blog!
What link??
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Why hello there!
Welcome I hope you like this site as much as I do. If you have any questions don't hesitate to ask.
Dec 5, 2010 -
Re: Hey! I'm Beka.
Hello Beka, Welcome to the site, I found this site the same way you did, and I love it so I know you will. If you have any questions at ...
Nov 30, 2010 -
Re: Mannequin Love
Wow your poem is amazing I love it. I thought it was so great. A mannequin is not something that everyone can write a poem about. I saw the title ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Pride Before Drown
I thought it was a great poem. Yours is one of the first poems on here where the proper use of commas and periods is used, thank you for that. ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: The Way Things Are
I loved this story. I thought you had some very good ideas and points in this story. I'm sorry I'm not good at reviewing, but I don't see anything wrong ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Girl in Blue
I loved the story. I could relate so much, because I was a little girl who would walk by the kickball field and playground, just to hear what people where ...
Nov 28, 2010 -
Re: Life Through the horses eyes.
I thought your story was great. You gave a lot of information, that can be both good and bad. You don't want to bire the reader, but you also don't ...
Nov 28, 2010
