Mickeystwin33

Wow, is all I can say. I never heard of all that fuss over eighth graders. (The most exiting thing I did in eighth grade was a field trip to ...

I held back my tears as I slowly walked home from school, wishing I did not have to go. I finally got close enough to see that house, my house, ...

I loved this poem I'm not good with the nitpicky stuff, I only have one improvement. So she continues To search the world Looking For the girl she once knew ...

You were always so sweet, So kind, My angel, My Grandma. You helped me without knowing it, and I regret never telling you it I love you, I’ll miss you, ...

Wow that is an awesome Tanka. I loved how you went through so many people. It was a lot of names, but it was well worth reading.

I love this it is so cute, and so true.

This is a great story. I love the fact that you jumped from two different point-of-views, even though it did make it a little confusing. You did not quite explained ...

I was bullied from the time I was six until I was thirteen. When I stopped fighting back they stopped trying. When I was in 5th grade it was terrible. ...

You've picked on me so long, With never any reason. Kindergarten was my favorite year, Before all your teasing. Then it starting killing me, An awful pain was what I'd ...

I often wonder how, Or why, People can just stand there, As they watch another cry, I know the answer, FEAR, The scary thought, We all hear, The hiss that ...

This is an awesome poem, mostly because, it is very true. Even the kindest and purest of us all resort to the evil known as lying. Everyone knows the pain ...

This was a very good poem. I could visualize every part. I was a little confused at this part Then a kiss on my face, Softer than a bread, This ...

This poem is amazing. I loved every bit of it. I actually read it aloud to myself twice, because I found it so beautiful. I love the theme of this ...

I loved this story. It was great. My favorite part was when she told him why she did not like him. I liked that part because i completely agree with ...

All i can say, or I guess type, is wow. This is amazing. I can definitely see how you got first place. Your piece is awesome in every sense of ...