Micheley

For all you who actually read this, thank you! I almost didn't finish it, but it bugged me knowing something wasn't complete q: soo here's the next chapter [: ‘ ...

This is the first poem I ever actually took seriously. Its may not make sense so constructive criticism is very much appreciated :) The girl staring back at me Was ...

I'm so sorry it's taken me so long to get this up! My fambam and I are moving and it's insane around here. But yeah. I hope you guys enjoy ...

Oh my sweet goodness. I almost cried! This piece is incredible. I love how you went back to the girls giggling and boys laughing at him ( The girls didn’t ...

This was SO good! I almost felt like the main char., and even found myself grinning like a retard at the screen at this part: He tells a joke, but ...

Awww this is so cute!!! It's almost like I can feel what they feel and getting attached to them. Ok! The underlined means that shouldn't be there while the red ...

Argh you have no clue how much that just motivated me. Thank you (:

I don't know how to cross out anything so the underlined things is what needs to go. and the red is what could be added. All you have to do ...

This reminded me of my first, and last, year of volleyball, bench warmer for sure. To bad no one ever swallowed a guitar pick.. just kidding! That'd be terrible! Anyways! ...

45. . . . and the bagpipes. Haha how cool would that be! Bagpipes are pretty much amazing (: Your bucket list is cute. I hope you're able to do ...

ROFL! Your genius-ness in this kept me laughing the whole way down, I loved it! Great job :D

I laughed through the whole thing. Pretty much a little more then amazing (; But this... We only worry about the important things, like when the next Superbowl is, or ...

'Oh, please, no.' I thought as I felt a sinking my chest. I was frozen. I couldn't breathe. He looked at my face and, surprised by the look on my ...

This totally had me laughing the whole time. It was great!! Write some more plz? *offers cookies n' milk* O;

Ok so before you start reading, I thought you might enjoy it more if it actually made sense. The underlining is things you should add or take out. So yeah ...