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Re: Freeing A Caged Bird (A Naruto Fan-Fic)- Chapter Two
Okay, first of all, If no one's reviewing because my chapters are that dreadful, someone please tell me! it'd definitely not because you're chapters are dreadful! It was super interesting, ...
Oct 30, 2011 -
Re: Call me Alice: Part Two
No criticism at all, except for you made it to interesting (seriously, nothing wrong at all) and now I'm hooked D: Could you please tell me when the next chapter ...
Aug 24, 2011 -
Re: Guardian Angel
This is adorable!! It's so sweet, but also sad (I mean, obviously. The dude dies, and leaves behind his girlfriend! I should stop rambling now). Like AnAmericanTeenager said, it seemed ...
Aug 23, 2011 -
Re: Bunny Fluffy
Once, there were people on YWS who decided to nickname Galerius "Fluffy Bunny". This stupid meme spread like wildfire. Eventually, they all got weird and exotic diseases while he lived ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: In A Second
First short story ever, hope you like it! ^__^ "I know how serious you were about Alex, Kayla, but it's seriously better if you just forget him. He's not worth ...
Aug 22, 2011 -
Re: Glazed Over By Memories
Hello! This is a great piece! It grabbed me and made me want more. Where's the next part? D: Alright, on a serious note, there's only a few things that ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Return What's Mine
I stumbled toward the throne in which a human-looking man was bestowed upon. He had pallid skin and hair as dark as his heart. Cruelty was written in his coal-black ...
Aug 10, 2011 -
Re: Good-bye Chapter 5 (End)
This is the end! Yaayy [: I sighed as I walked into the church’s lobby for basketball practice. Britini ran up to hug me with a huge smile. I smiled, ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Extraordinary: Chapter 1
Oooh I'm super excited for this story! Maybe try to describe the character a bit more? I didn't know it was a girl until I read the description, and still ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Frozen Rose - Part 1 (Rated for swearing.)
Micheley here! This was super cute! I kinda want a second part lol :P Here we go :D Varsha- who had been asleep all this long , woke up, rubbing ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Diary of a Lost Soul
Awwwhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! So cute!!!! Emotion was weaved into every word; I almost started crying. It's so beautiful! At first I thought it was a girl writing, but then Amy came and.. ...
Jun 3, 2011 -
Re: Don't Greet Me
That was so incredibly adorable!! :D I loved it ^__^ The only thing I could find is, and that was when I finally admitted gravity had humiliate d? me in ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Cupid
I was bored one day and thought of my ex, so I came up with this. Please be critical, I want to be come better :) I gave you everything, ...
May 15, 2011 -
Re: Marry Me
Rylee had a dream of being a scientist and marrying a girl who was smart and loyal and not to mention, defiantly I think you meant definitely not me, at ...
May 2, 2011 -
Re: First Date
Andrew and Kevin were arguing about the better sport, Sean and Sheila were bickering about their food while Hitomi watched amused I think it should be either, watched with amusement ...
May 2, 2011
