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Hi werewolfgirl! Welcome to the site. I hope you like it here. :) Yes, this is quite a large forum. But it doesn't take long to get used to and ...

Hi thecamillecalalas! To start of with, I'll say that I liked the simplicity of the poem. Although, I did feel as though it's a tiny, tiny bit too simple. I ...

Hi! As theotherone have said, you really do need to format your story properly. It makes it a lot more easier to read. Since with huge chunky paragraphs, I tend ...

Hi! I quite enjoyed your poem. I liked the topic it explored, I don't think there's been many poems about vegetarianism before. So the topic was quite an original one ...

This seemed a bit short to me. Although I'm not sure how to continue it. Please tell me your thoughts on it. Critiques are also more than welcome. :) A ...

Hello! I really liked the atmosphere the first stanza created. It had this sort of gentle and calming feel to it. You also wrote it in a way that it ...

Hi! To be honest, I'm not a big fan of the formatting. I like the idea, but, I think that it'd be better if you tweaked it a bit. So ...

Hi Olivia! You sound very interesting from what I've read of your description. Pleased to *meet* you! :) I love to play the piano, guitar, ukulele, harmonica, trumpet, cello, and ...

Hi Uo! I find that I liked the story even though it's one that I've seen quite a few times, I find that if it's written in the right way, ...

Hi cupcake! You're right, this is quite short. I have seen the what the contest is about, I'd suggest that you put in things about how magnificent and extraordinary it ...

Hi! Okay, I wanted to go over this particular part: “Hi daddy!” his little girl shouted as he entered. “Hey, Griffin, did you finish your homework?” he asked as he ...

Hi Canine! Welcome to YWS. Don't worry about giving good criticsm and all that. It'll come. Just read other people's post and see what they write and eventually you'll get ...

Hi! First of all, I have to agree with VuzzyCat and paperbackheart, the girl seems a bit stoic and calm for someone who's about to commit suicide. Infact, when I ...

Hi! Well, I'll start of with the rhyme. I think that the rhyme in this was really, really well written. So well that I didn't notice it when I first ...

-1 more reviews. Now how am I going to do that?