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Hi Adara! Welcome to YWS! Hope you like it here. :) As for the Storybooks, well they're more of a roleplaying thing. Where someone comes up with a plot and ...

Hai! I think that you have a pretty good start here, I say start because there's still so much more we don't know. We have only the slightest glimpse into ...

This would probably make more sense if you read part one. So, here is part one, if anyone's interested. But you don't have to read it. Although you might get ...

Hi! I think that this is a rather interesting piece. The narrator's voice ring through very clearly. Although it sounded a tad too casual for me. Usually not all the ...

Hi! I think that this is a very meaningful poem with really nice symbolism with the spider's web and life. I think that that's quite true. It's also quite original ...

Hi! I really liked the scene you painted with this poem. There was some really nice vivid images. I also liked how you used those images to capture that emotion ...

Hi! Well, I think that this is a really good poem. The flow was really good for most of it (I did get choked up on some lines though, I'll ...

Hello Jordynn! Welcome to YWS. I hope you like it here. :) Everyone's really nice and friendly here. It's a great community. :) book;the hunger games triolgy I love the ...

1. Should we continue with Review Teams on Review Days? Yes, personally, I really liked the review teams. I think that they make me feel a bit more pressured to ...

Hi! I think this is a very good poem, you have a problem that the narrator's facing in it and you brough that across really well. You also threw in ...

Hi Dreamwalker! If you have time, would you mind reviewing this , for me? Any critiques and comments you have would be much appreciated. :)

Please tell me your thoughts on this. All criticism would be very much appreciated. :) Since the beginning of time, it had been said that the child who was born ...

Hi! Okay, I have to agree with you that the rhyming scheme was a bit repetitive. It was repetitive but I thought that it fit in beautifully with the poem. ...

Hi! I have to agree with velar that this story needs more emotion. It feels really, really stoic at the moment. Like this part: At lunch, she decided to sit ...

Hi! I'll agree with the previous reviewers that this poem is quite true. It sort of reminds me of Rudyard Kipling's If . Which is quite a good poem itself. ...