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I stare at the white walls , the silent tears drip from my face I look into the small mirror , my face pale for not having seen the sun ...

Where the words are written but their (get rid of the 'their?') not spoken Where you speak your mind and the (get rid of 'the'?) rules are broken You can ...

I like this poem :). I can't find anything wrong with it, except for the comma that should come after 'my life' like this: My soul, my life , you ...

Hi! This is a very nice poem, with some fairly confusing questions, it made me think for a bit. :) Some little things: What is death? Is it being born ...

Hahaha. This is such a funny story.Rather random, but still funny. Loved how Edward Cullen dies as well. :)

I agree with the last reviewer that this stanza's formatting is a bit weird: We used to find comfort, and protection. Confidence, and escape in each individual pleasure. What about ...

This poem has a rather depressed sort of feel to it. With the lost souls and all that. But it's still really good. There's a bit of subtle rhyming here ...

You described inspiration perfectly! Just some little things: Sometimes, inspiration evades me, Hiding like a shadow in the night, Descending into that deep , dark hole, my mind. Sorry, but ...

Loved this poem. It's short, simple and effective. I liked how you made the lines rhyme as well. Keep up the good work :)

That was such a heartfelt and honest poem. All I can say is that it's amazing! I loved it!

Wow. The first stanza just took my breath away. It's so awesome. The first line was absolutely beautiful, I don't know why I think so, but I just loved it.

((Hey, had to write a couple poems for class, sadly though, this was to only one that I could find...)) My Own World Like a portal into a far away ...

Wow. That was awesome. Paper that I folded , scented and sent to you On Valentine’s Day. I think that a comma there would make it look a little bit ...

Loved, loved, loved, loved the title. I can not say enough how awesome it is and it suits the poem perfectly too! The first stanza was my favourite. The way ...

Hey there! Well, the second haiku, I think that you could maybe replace the word 'site' with 'sight' maybe? I'm not too sure about the rest of the poems and ...