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Alright, I feel as though you've put a bit too much questions in your poem, a few is good, but a whole poem shouldn't just be about queations. It shoud ...

Hello ToodleyDoo, Welcome to YWS. I'm sure you'll find everyone quite friendly here. And yes, I do have to agree with SmylinG, your name is awesome. And you play the ...

The title might've been a bit of a give away. But anyways... Feel free to tear it apart. *Edited* Welcome, unknowing tourists! We have all sorts of beautiful trees here, ...

Okay, I will admit that this is a rather depressing poem. Depressing but powerful. It's also very lyrical as shadowknight155 said. I don't know why, but I started hearing it ...

Okay, this poem have a very gentle flow to it. Although third stanza seems a bit strange, since the five lines just popped out of nowhere. So, here's my suggestion: ...

Alright, to the review. You have great imagery here: I'm not a pristine glass image splayed with color and adornments. I'm a piece of shattered glass, plain, and forever broken. ...

Agreed with the last reviewers that this poem paints a vivid picture and have beautiful imagery in it. I also think that it's a very... exotic? poem. It might've something ...

Hi ehte92! You have a beautiful poem there with a message that the whole world should listen to: Everyone's unique and special, even though others might not see it. Also, ...

Have I mentioned that I loved this poem yet? If not, then, there, you've heard it. I really like this poem, because, well for one, it's structured beautifuly, they're like ...

I think that this poem wouldn't hurt with puctuations put in it. Whilst we're at grammatical errors, may I suggest that you split the poem into stanzas? It's easier to ...

Alright, first of all, you shouldn't put rhyming first in poetry. If you do, it makes the lines seemed forced and out of place. I'm not saying that you're poem ...

You have a very pleasant, charming and as you put it, innocent poem there. I can see the charm of the garden, through your eyes. The poem is also very ...

Hello TheKing8, Welcome to YWS. It's like heaven for writers and it grows on you real quick. I think that most of the basics have already been explained by SmylinG. ...

Hello nekros, You have some powerful imagery in your poem. They painted a really vivid picture in my head. However, I don't really get the story behind this. There's some ...

I was looking for a friend and not just anyone would do, When my eyes stopped searching I was looking at you. Capital 'I' over here We would look at ...