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Well, this is the important bit really: It's not so much how old (or young) you are, but rather how good your writing is. That's how it works, once you ...

Well, this is interesting. The new twists you've set up about how vampire and werewolves were friends and not enemies was one that I've never seen that before. Very creative, ...

Hello! Welcome to YWS. Here, you will get a lot of feedbacks and reviews, provided of course that you are willing to do the same with others. Everyone here's pretty ...

My pen takes contact with the paper, This line sounds a bit awkward, I think the problem is with the word 'takes'. Wouldn't 'makes' make more sense and flow? and ...

Okay, I'll have to agree with the other reviewers about how the first stanza sounds awkward. I think that have something to do with the tense mix up happening. See: ...

Hello there KawaiiNeko! I hope you enjoy this site. You say you listen to J-pop and K-pop and I've been wanting to listen to those for a long time, they ...

'Kay. To start of with, I'd like to say, no, this isn't boring. Not in the least. I really like your characters there, especially Hades :). They aren't bland, boring ...

Nice, very nice. The narrator's voice ring through very clearly. It's like I can almost feel their personality. And that's good. You, can call me anything you want. (cause I ...

Rose felt her heart break into a million pieces, as she watched her beloved walk out the door. Rose could not bear the pain, yet she still watched him go. ...

Amusing, very amusing. I liked the story progression and the revelation at the end. Hadn't expected that. And yes, I do get it. Although, like the previous reviewers I have ...

Hello Sleeptheif! Welcome to YWS! Interesting username you got there. I don't know about the rest of the authors you mentioned there, but I do know that Cornelia Funke and ...

Okay, I found this poem a tad confusing. I think it may have had something to do with this line: I feel your tears stream down my face It took ...

Alright, I'll have to agree with highwhitesocks here about how you given this poem a new flavour and twist. It's actually very refreshing to read something different instead of the ...

you connect with friendship? Good start with the question there. Could she really care about me? Three against one. So here you wrote 'she' meaning one person but then in ...

I agree with the others that some parts sounds forced. I think that have a lot to do with the rhyming. I know you want to rhyme, but you shouldn't ...