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Hello! Okay, first of all, I have some nitpicks. So here goes: or like a cat with a mouse . get you out of my head . I would think ...

Hi! Okay, so I really liked the tone of the story, the character's voice came of very clearly and it was a really pleasant sort of voice to read. Although ...

Heya! I find that your imagery in this poem was really good and powerful. I also loved how you linked it to nature with the sparrows and butterflies and all ...

Hi! I rather liked your poem. It was simple yet effective. You also wrote it in such a way that it didn't go on or ages and ages saying what ...

Alec "Whoa, calm down Iz," Alec said, taking Arwen's side, "after all, she did help us." Isabelle narrowed her eyes suspiciously, it didn't look like she cared whether Arwen had ...

Hello! First things first, I really liked what you were trying to say in the poem. I think that it was a really sweet concept. However, I do think that ...

Alec The dwarves looked back up at us, a bit uneasily. As if wondering what it can or can not do. One of the dwarves stepped forward. "I'm afraid we ...

Alec -Werewolf Alec stood still, watching their endless bickering. It was quite obvious that the elf wasn't going to give it back through peaceful negotiation. Meaning that some other action ...

Alec -Werewolf Alec stayed there calmly letting Isabelle and Adam try to negotiate with the Elf. There was no point in adding to the arguement, it'd probably get worse. So, ...

Alec -Werewolf "I don't think there should be territories." Alec heard a voice from behind. He cautiously turned around, you can't be too careful here. He found to his, surprise ...

Hi! I think that you have a very sweet piece here. I liked how you put some description between the dialogues, I think that was really good, because we get ...

Alec - Werewolf "Alec! You missed it!" Adam said with a large smile on his face. Alec had changed to human form a short while back, he was still a ...

Alec West -Werewolf Alec was out on the open forrest, enjoying the soft earthy feel under his paws and the wind streaking his dirty blonde fur. Sometimes, life as a ...

Hello! I can not agree more with the reviewers above me. They made very excellent points about run one sentences and spaces after commas. I'd fix those up a bit, ...

**Alright, I'm new at this, so please point out anything I'm doing wrong. Including this (if it's wrong).** Name: Alexander (Alec) West Age: Appears 17, actual age unknown. Race: Werewolf ...