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Re: What's in your CD player?
"The Cure" has currently got me stuck in my room studying, wish i could stop singing along long enough to actually do some work though
Nov 26, 2005 -
Re: Are Antidepressants given too freely?
Surely one of the truest signs of insanity is the inability to comprehend that you may actually be insane, that what you do and how you act are fueled by ...
Nov 24, 2005 -
Re: What Ships May Come
Reading this poem I thought the inspiration was more recent, last few days have been real pea soupers, and the cold I am currently suffering from is due to me ...
Nov 24, 2005 -
Re: Erasure
I really liked this, you dealt with feelings and emotions that people often try too hard to describe, but you kept imagery and descriptions short and sweet which really worked. ...
Nov 24, 2005 -
Re: A Familiar Path
[u]A Familiar Path[/u] I stroll through night’s streets, the cool air gently numbs my skin and I welcome it. Each breath seems to linger at the back of my throat ...
Nov 20, 2005 -
Re: She
The increased rate of the rhyming was intentional to represent the actual scene, whether or not it worked is up to you guys though
Nov 17, 2005 -
Re: She
She She stands there still Her crow black hair a shadow vagrant to the world Her soul is chill And plain to see, heralded by dark flag unfurled Eyes colder ...
Nov 16, 2005 -
Re: Amidst the Dark, Among the Light
(This is something that i started and kinda felt had promise but, as is my way it lost momentum and currently fails to make any progress, i have quite a ...
Nov 14, 2005 -
Re: Light
Thats kinda what i thought, i had this beautiful image but i couldn't concentrate on it or truly get it down. I shall get my pen out and try and ...
Nov 14, 2005 -
Re: Light
I'm really not sure about this one, so any constructive criticism would be more than welcome. Light This silhouette lies beside me Faint curves of silver amidst an eternity of ...
Nov 14, 2005 -
Re: The Outsider by Albert Camus
L'Etranger doesn't translate as stranger, its meaning is closer to someone being strange rather than being an actual stranger which implies someone we don't know, outsider implies someone not within ...
Nov 13, 2005 -
Re: The Outsider by Albert Camus
The Title varies with the translation in french its L'Etranger, sorry about my previous post im not sure it makes any sense.
Nov 13, 2005 -
Re: The Outsider by Albert Camus
Hmmmm interesting to understand or to empathize, is it easier to understand why he feels how he does, i never felt you were given any reason for why he doesn't ...
Nov 12, 2005 -
Re: Day (previously "untitled")
any kind of constructive criticism would really help, also anyone got any ideas for a title? Day's brightness has barely passed And the shadow already holds it's sway Within my ...
Nov 12, 2005 -
Re: Test Icicles
I saw the Test icicles play at leeds, i had never heard of them and had no idea what to expect, They were bloody fantastic, had so much energy, i ...
Nov 12, 2005
