Meta-Messiah

I really like the imagery in this, gothic, melodramatic, very much like something i would write. but i felt the flow wasnt there, the lines didnt run off the tongue ...

How about Machiavelli, or maybe raskolnikov, hmm they dont exactly roll of the tongue but they have class, and thats what matters. oh and if you ever get a boat ...

Electric six are the amazing gods of disco rock shock pop, haha i love making up genres, rather sadly i know all the words to all of their songs hmmmm ...

Show me how you do that trick The one that makes me scream she said the one that makes me laugh she said and threw her arms around my head ...

All the usual stuff (not saying its not important but i take being thankful for that pretty much as a given) and 1. Having a fully working, and inquisitive mind ...

haha I thought this was really good, original subject, enjoyable to read and yet moving. Hmm if you cant remember writing it maybe your a sleep poet, rising from your ...

I really like this, the structure flows well, and the satire is subtle while still coming across very strongly (hmm is that an oxymoron), i've gotta say man from what ...

Gotta agree with elephant both tattoos and piercings can be sooo sexy if done well, but i personally think they have to be subtle not like some f*** off 5cm ...

Gotta say i miss, all the different words there were for "chavs", at some point it all became homogenised and we only had one word, i say bring back townies, ...

I've heard this before somewhere, there's some tired old cliched similie that describes my minds inability to store anything but i forget. Tell me if im way off here because ...

I liked this but i had a few little gripes with it. I wasn't sure about the double use of "and" in the first stanza. Also i kinda felt the ...

Cheers Brian, haven't edited it online yet but it seems to flow a bit better now.

Lots of interesting images but there it does seem to lack a real sense of connection, that it is all part of the same poem, rather than a stream of ...

Really is a great way to keep us in the working cycle, we come into maturity in dept and we bloody well pass our use by date with a far ...

Electric Six "Vibrator"