Merry_Haven

* SeraphTree ~ Wow. Thank you for the line by line critic. What you pointed out will really help. Yes, I guess I'm having a hard time with telling then ...

* Roo ~ Thank you for taking your time to read this chapter. I appreciate it greatly. Thank you everyone else! I have took all nit-picks and revised and edited ...

* KikiSaysRAWR! ~ Thank you for saying this chapter is vivid. The question that you have asked will be answered in or throughout the story. * Angel of Death ~ ...

* Night Mistress ~ Thanks. I hope the plot is thickening. Okay, the parent thing will definitely come up in the next chapter. Promise. :wink: No!! I'm making this to ...

* CastlesInTheSky ~ Oh, don't worry if you can't do the detailed critique. I don't want your fingers to get more numb. I thank you, for all the pointers, and ...

* lotti ~ All corrections are made. And thank you for the in-depth crit. It helped out a lot. I will pm you when I posted Chapter One. Thank you, ...

* Night Mistress ~ Yeah, I know Historical is my thing, but I decided to try something different this time. :wink: Oh, don't worry about the grammar thing. There will ...

* KikiSaysRAWR! Thank you! Thank you! You have no idea how much your review/comment made me feel. I will definitely revise today. *Merry

Everyone - I would greatly appreciate reviews for this story I am writing. Thank you for your time. *Merry

CastlesInTheSky & ashleylee - Thank you guys for the helpful tips. I just used them and revised this chapter, the best I could. Look for the next chapter, coming soon. ...

Clo- Awww, thanks. What you said means a lot. For the nitpicks, I will work on them when I have the time today. So thanks for pointing those out for ...

Angel of Death- Thank you, Angel. Your comments are too nice. :wink: I will edit and revise today, when I have finished your Jane Effect story. I will definitely pm ...

Angel of Death- Um, Angel. I haven't edited this chapter, yet. But I'm glad you liked it. God, no. I hate Paramore. But, I couldn't think of who else to ...

Angel of Death- NO!!!! I wanted to revise and edit some of this. But if you liked it, then I guess it's okay. Oh, I like elegant and gorgeous. Thanks ...

ashleylee- Ugh!! Man, this is totally killing me. I have got to stop over telling things. It's driving me crazy! Hmmm. I'll try out the dream scenario. Thanks for that ...