Merry_Haven

*kiwiauthor_13~ Here are some comments & thoughts while reading: * Nothing ~ When you say that he means nothing to your MC, doesn't that sound a little rude? Was he ...

Hey, Bri. I'm just going to point out the mistakes that didn't seem right here. Otherwise, everyone did an amazing job with everything else. The leaves quivered at the wind’s ...

* Hannah ~ Thank you for pointing out the grammar mistakes. I have just revised this. And yes, I do have a problem with over-expressive use of commas. Even my ...

*jebbie830~ I shall call you, jebbie!! I don't like numbers with names. But it's totally up to you. ~ But, I love your name! Anyway, I'm really off topic, here... ...

*asxz~ Hello. I see everyone has welcomed you already. Cool. Well... Welcome!! Scott Westerfeld, huh? For the library, for the last month's Teen Book Club we had to read his ...

*ballerina13~ Hello. Just to let you know, I'm really slow at getting to the welcome forums. But! I'm here to greet you. Welcome!! By the way, do you love ballet? ...

*Kayleigh~ Hello. Just to let you know, I'm really slow at getting to the welcome forums. But! I'm here, to greet you. Welcome! I know who .:Echelon: is. Doesn't she ...

*Night Mistress~ Thank you. Thank you. Thank you! For the review! It means a lot. Yeah, I spent over an hour writing very detaily. With the name, I wanted to ...

Hello, everyone! For all that has read Sophia's Suitors, I thank you. But I have come back from several months without revising and started a brand new piece. I am ...

*Angel of Death~ Here are my thoughts and comments while reading... * Just a little side note ~ Oh, man. A writer's break down? That must be terrible, Angel. When ...

*XxBrokenVainxX~ Here are some comments and thoughts while reading... * My first thought ~ While reading it seemed a little cliche. The whole girl liking best guy friend. I've read ...

*ashleylee~ Here are some thoughts and comments while reading... * Just a little side note ~ You know, I'm always up to your new stories. And I do enjoy them, ...

Ah well, I already another surprise in store, might as well spill the beans. There's something missing in this sentence. Try,... Ah well, I already have... , the word have ...

*Rhesus~ Hello. Welcome to the crazy site for young writers. :smt003 ~ Yes, we are crazy at times. So you say you write historical fiction. Me, too!! Which time period ...

*Hannah~ Hello. I see you have been welcomed warmly. :D Well, I've came here to welcome you too. Welcome. Welcome. Welcome!!! A bunches of times. I hope you have a ...