Merry_Haven

Hi it's Merry again. I read ch.2 and it was like "Whoa...I had a really good feeling" reading this. Okay when she talked about her sisters, is Adelicia one of ...

Whoa there. That was...strangely good. I liked it and somehow it made me feel like I was actually there at the party and house. When I read this I noticed ...

ashleylee, Thanks again for looking at it! I'll try my best at revising it again for the fourth time. Maybe this time it could be better. Well off to writing... ...

lucyy, Since I'm new at the whole reviewing thing I'll try my best at doing it. First of all the character description was a whole lot better than mine! :) ...

~Hey, back again, with the first chapter. Enjoy.~ Present The scent of the wild flowers and the salty air coming from the beach felt absolutely wonderful. I could feel the ...

alwaysawriter, Thanks I'll fix it right now. -Merry

~This poem goes with my saga "The Four Seasons." It's for the Eldwin daughters. Enjoy!~ For it is a burning nightmare to gain a kiss of the immortal, For it ...

~I'm deleting this story because I have no wish to continue with it~

Oh my god! I feel like crying! This preface gave me an idea what would happen next. I would like to know what she did wrong for her true love ...

Wow. I really like it but I couldn't get the second part about the boy. What was it supposed to mean, I guess this is the prologue anyway. Otherwise the ...

Night Mistress- First of all it was a great prolouge that made me want more. Now who's speaking and who's eyes are we seeing it through? What emotions are shown ...

Hi everyone! I just joined this writing community and I hope it'll be lots of fun. I can't wait to read some of your work and hopefully get reviews on ...