Merry_Haven

salsashanno- Wow. I really like this story. I definitely got to read more. I didn't see much that could of been fixed. Otherwise I'm off to part three... -Merry

salsashanno- When I saw that you had St. Patricks Day, I freaked. I just love that holiday. All that green. *smiles* The title: Who Would've Thought? didn't make sense, but ...

Bickazer- Welcome to YWS! You're right, this is a highly active site. Don't worry, for me at least, I haven't actually started something then finish it. But when I came ...

Ashley- Oh my god! Are you going to write more to this? It was so good and gripping. I'm breathless. It was so breathtaking. I just love this story. I ...

Ashley- I am proud of you. You're punctuation was done very well. When I read about Caradoc, he seemed like a god, like Isadora mentioned. Sorry, if I can't think ...

Ashley- Oh, I like, I like this. It was getting very intense between Isadora and Lucretius. And of course, Nicandro comes to the rescue. And I'm starting to wonder about ...

Ha! You totally made me laugh when I saw what she was reading. How hilarious. Twilight, of all books. *rolls eyes* To the point, yes it was short{maybe too short ...

Ashley- Wow, very intense relationship between Isadora and Nicandro at the end. I like it! I definitely should read more...which I'll do right now. Thanks for posting this story up. ...

Ashley- I noticed I had to reread the last four paragraphs because I couldn't figure out what was going on with Nicandro. This was short, but I enjoyed it a ...

Ashley- Nothing much I can say. Besides what the others noticed. Um, is Isadora going to do something for the poverty stricken? Like in the next few chapters? That's all ...

Ashley- Sorry I've hadn't the time to read this, but I regret I hadn't read it sooner. Because this first chapter had definitely gotten me hooked by the first paragraph. ...

Ashley- That was so sad! And yet so good. The way you describe the scenery, especially the fall leaves, is just amazing. I felt sorry for Tony that Darci cheated ...

Lurlene_Mcdaniel_Rox- I kept my eyes focused on the computer screen because this story was intense. It was well written, but I felt like the ending was rushed. Just a little. ...

booklover- Hehe. Mary. {my own name.} :lol: Anyway, how did her mother find her in the first place? And how is Trey awful? And why did Mary run away? I ...

crazy_lil_blondie- Wow, that was really good. Almost made me cry. :cry: I would say give more descriptions on the scenery, and thoughts of Lizzie, but that was all ready pointed ...