Merry_Haven

girlwithquestions - Wow, that was really touching. And I'm glad you added the part of the past. To get to know a little more of Lena and her family. The ...

jasmine - Whoa, wait a minute there. Damien's a vampire? I would have never guessed. Yet, I read on... So Damien no Nigel was really there at the accident? That's ...

Salliewalker- Cute name. I like it. I'm glad you became interested in YWS. And I hope this place is very welcoming to you. Oh, and welcome! I would like to ...

~I'm having a hard time writing the length of the sentences. So if you could help me, that would be greatly appreciated. Enjoy!~~Edited~~ Morning The sun is bright as it ...

Portable_Jukebox - It's great to meet you! And Welcome back. So what do you like to write? Poetry or fiction? Or maybe non-fiction. And what genre? Anyway, off I go... ...

jasmine12 - Seriously, why do your reviews always make me crack up? *cracks up laughing* Don't worry I'll post the next part up when I finish it and when I'm ...

jasmine12 - When I get the chance I'll fix it. {before school comes :evil: } and, of course I'll take your pointers and everyone else's and use it. Again, thanks! ...

jasmine12 - haha! You're review totally made me laugh! I'll work on the conversations between Sophia and Issac. When I finally get the chance today. :? Otherwise, thanks again. -Merry

Bickazer - Thanks for the helpful review. When I get the chance today, I'll revise it. And no, this wasn't a inconvenience for me. I need all the help I ...

jasmine12 - I've read books with the characters saying their names, in each sentence. But those were the classics. No, I'm not going to ignore your comments. Your comments help ...

jasmine12 - Okay, thanks for the James' thing. I had no idea I was telling and not showing. I'll definitely change that, when I get the chance. Don't worry, I ...

jasmine12 - I didn't know that for the outfit. I'll have to change that for the story. So thanks for info. But this is the 18th hundreds. Otherwise, thanks for ...

girlwithquestions - Thanks for reading. It means a lot to me. For the format, I'll work on it when I get the chance. Otherwise, thanks for checking it out. -Merry

~Revised. Tell me if it needs to be shorter or longer phrases. Knowing this is a free verse. Otherwise negative reviews are welcomed. Enjoy.~ Sweet Sixteen Sweet Sixteen. Is that ...

~Okay, so I had no idea if YWS published free verse stories and so I had to ask. If "other" fiction doesn't apply to this, then tell me and I'll ...