Merry_Haven

~This is revised and well, enjoy!~ Love poetry, the very essence of marriage within a single letter. Those romantic words form into the thoughts of proposal. The elderly doorman came ...

Emily - Welcome! And don't be shy. Come out of the corner and into the spotlight. Don't worry I was shy too when I started on YWS. Ewww, school. Goodness, ...

jasmine - This was quite a while ago when I wrote this. I know. I really suck at the commas after the name thing. It drives me crazy when I ...

jasmine - And then I question...how the heck can Genna kiss Jasper if he's a ghost? But then he's human at night. How utterly strange? {sorry, if I seem rude. ...

jasmine - Okay, I saw a grammar mistake but I don't know how to use the quote thing. You're gonna have to show me. Anyway, I thought it was a ...

~Part 3 might sound a little weird, but tell me what you think. Oh, and Enjoy!~~Edited.~~ Aunt Eliza She is my aunt who has taken me in for now. She's ...

jasmine - Hey, so I read up to this chapter and there's nothing left. Like no more. What is wrong with you?! You have to post more to this! Okay, ...

leahhh - First off you remind me of Amy Adams. {the Enchanted girl} I'm also a senior this year but will graduate in June. Sadly. :cry: Make sure you check ...

shadowed_mist - Cool name. I like it. 8) I see that you write romance. Which I totally love. And it would be so cool to read your work! For me, ...

Ashley - I seriously enjoyed e-v-e-r-y word of this. It was that good. And I'm totally serious. You seriously have to write more to this. I need more of this. ...

Ashley - No way, that did not just happen. God, I'm liking this more and more. You totally have to write part 5. I really want to know what's going ...

Ashley - So that's what happened to the mom. She what...drowned? Well, that's what I could make out when reading this. If Lokesh doesn't want to be a warrior. Then ...

jasmine - This does seem like a twilight thing but only with the William thing. Other than that, it has nothing to do with that book. I see that the ...

Mally - Um, what's going on with the girls and that guy? You could break up the paragraphs, so it's easier to read. But it's totally up to you. For ...

In_the_Moonlight - This was short and quick, but easy to understand. Knowing this is a short story, you could give little descriptions of Heather, Jamie, and Trevor. What do they ...