Merry_Haven

Bickazer - I took your pointers into consideration and edited the best I could do. So thank you for all your criticism, it helped a lot. Ashley - Thanks for ...

Jessica- Hey. Hi. Ho-there!! Welcome to the family, Jessica. I hope you are most welcomed here. Google. They just have everything, don't they? :P Oh my goodness! You have that ...

Jasmine- First off my Internet just cut off on me, so I'm back here reviewing again. Anyway, was Willow in a coma? Because I couldn't really tell what was wrong ...

Welcome, Ella! I'll try my best to answer your questions. 1) For the review, it's like helpful tips here and there. Constructive criticism that can help the writer become better. ...

Jasmine - I couldn’t wrap my head around the idea that I would be more excited to see Peter than Jasper. It just didn’t make any sense. I thought Genna ...

DwahnePipe - Hey, welcome to the YWS family!! I hope you are most welcomed here. :D So about your very basic outline of life... *what do you like writing? Poetry? ...

Holly - Um, Holly? Where's chapter seven? You CAN'T just leave me in the dust like this. I want more. I need more. You have me hooked. Anyway, I can't ...

Holly - Dude, that last part was just great. Loved it! The cheesiness of Wiley was hilarious! That totally made me crack up laughing. And there is absolutely NO way ...

Holly - This chapter seemed a little odd to me. Maybe because it was too short, but it was cute for Mae's birthday. I want to know what's going on ...

Holly - Sorry if i didn't review that last chapter, I was to busy immersed in this story. There were only two things that stood out to me. 1) This ...

Holly - Like I said in our messages, I promised I'd read this. Because you gave a very descriptive summary. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ The Prologue confused me ...

Chelsea - Welcome! Welcome! and Welcome, again. Anyway, welcome to the YWS family. Doesn't everyone like Harry Potter? I've read all the books and seen all the movies besides the ...

Bittersweet - Dude, I'm totally lovin' your name. It's so...ugh!! I can't even find a word for it. Sorry, off topic. Anyway, I liked these short stories that were connected ...

Sarah - Hey, welcome! I hope YWS is very welcoming to you. So you write short stories? Cool. And a novel? I like to check that out...someday. What's it called? ...

Night Mistress - I am so sorry. :cry: I had posted this last night and forgot to pm everyone. 'Cause I was so tired and sleepy. I will definitely pm ...