Merry_Haven

Stella_Grrl- Hey and Hi!! Welcome, welcome, welcome!! :D Make sure you check out the help and support tab. Rules to follow, staff to contact, FAQ, and much more. So what ...

gloryfades- Hey and Hi!! Welcome to the YWS family and I hope you are most welcomed. :D Make sure you check out the help and support tab. Rules to follow. ...

Chapter Twenty-Two Bad or Good? Yeah!!! I am so ready for this. :D Here I come... I woke to the sound of monsters killing each other with machine guns. The ...

shelly- Hey and Hi!! :D Welcome to YWS. I hope you are most welcomed. Make sure you check out the help and support tab. Rules to follow, staff to contact, ...

Ashton- Hey! Hi. Ho there. Welcome to the YWS family. I hope you are most welcomed. :D Remember to check out the Help and Support tab. Rules to follow, staff ...

Krisy- First off, I love the title. So cute and true. Now, for my comments...God! I hate her mother. Becca is so right. Her mom is such a hag. Is ...

Jasmine- Chapter Seventeen Yeah!! I am so ready for this. :D My mind was fast enough to recognize the voice. “Ms. Avery?” Avery? Why's she here? Her blonde hair was ...

Okay, it's a little short and packed with spelling and grammar mistakes. Nit-pick away my friends. =) Of Course. :wink: But I'm glad for chapter sixteen. YEAH!!! I was waiting ...

First Name: Merry Nickname: Don't really have one. But dad calls me the "Mar" Favorite Color: GREEN!!! Song: My Worst Nightmare by Forever the Sickest Kids Food: Chocolate whoppers. For ...

janey- Hey! Hi. Ho there! Welcome to the YWS family. I hope you are most welcomed. :D Make sure you check out the Help and Support tab. Rules to follow, ...

CJeanene13- Okay. First off, remember to space out the paragraphs. Chunking the paragraphs, will make the reader not want to read it. Spread them out in separate paragraphs. Let them ...

Ashley- First off, the beginning of this chapter seriously made me laugh. :lol: I don't know why, actually. I guess it's the way you wrote it. :wink: Anyway, the dialogue ...

Lucy- Taking a quick sip of her latte she picked up on her walk in to work, Should be into. That's the only mistake I found. Other than that, I ...

~Hey, everyone. I decided awhile back that I didn't like my Fallen Sorrows. So I'm redoing everything. The characters will be the same but a whole other plot and different ...

Ophelia.Stornoway- Hey! Hi. Ho there. Welcome to the YWS family! :D I hope you are most welcomed. Make sure you check out the Help and Support tab. Rules for follow, ...