Merry_Haven

Elizabeth picked up the hem of her skirt and ran back towards home, hoping she'd make it. Her long, dark hair floated in the wind, blanketing the sky with black. ...

lilstrymkr13- Hi. Welcome to the family. I hope you have a fantastic time here. :D What direction would you like to go to? The fiction forums, poetry forums, art & ...

ashleylee- Ugh!! Man, this is totally killing me. I have got to stop over telling things. It's driving me crazy! Hmmm. I'll try out the dream scenario. Thanks for that ...

ashleylee- Haha. :lol: No, this is definitely in the present. I also wanted the MC to sound more human like then in a one-dimension way. So that's why I added ...

ashleylee - More fire. Check. More drama. Check. More description. Check. ~Real. I think I can do that. :wink: No!!! I don't want this flat! I'm definitely going have to ...

Lost_in_dreamland- Thanks Kristen! I absolutely love your comments! They seriously make me laugh. :lol: Cece came from the name Cecelia. But other than that, I won't give it away. You'll ...

Chapter Three Hey, Krisy! I'm so sorry it took so long to review this chapter. My bad. Well, here I go with my comments... Pain wasn’t something I had asked ...

This chapter is revised. The moment we stepped outside, the bitter winter air hit us. I tightly wrapped my scarf around me, as I heard Nixie brrr. We both walked ...

Lost_in_dreamland- Thanks, Kristen for the review! It's greatly appreciated. :D You know I had no idea that Nellie was from Wuthering Heights. My bad. :( Well, you're just gonna have ...

Lily- First off, I really love your name. It's so cute. (Yes, I'm in one of those "cute" phases) Hi. Welcome to the family of all sorts of writers. I ...

Monstrar- Hi. Welcome back! *waves back* I wasn't here in April (I joined in July) but, it's cool that you're back. :D Well, I can take a guess that you ...

M Dragon- Hi. Welcome to the family. I hope you have a wonderful time here. Remember the ratio of reviews and postings. It's two reviews on someone's piece of work ...

Night Mistress, ashleylee, and lucyy- Thank you for the wonderful reviews. They are greatly appreciated. But I have changed this story into a written form and not verse. I know, ...

CastlesInTheSky - I don't know why, but your reviews always seem to make me smile. And of course, laugh! You'll just have to see about the connections. :wink: Oh, thanks, ...

Thanks, guys for the reviews on the prologue. If you haven't read that part, I advise you should. It gives an insight about the story. This chapter is revised. December ...