Merry_Haven

Stephanie- Hey, welcome! I hope your first day here isn't so overwhelming. :wink: I would love to check our your short story. So what do you like to write besides ...

LaReina- Aren't we all trying to be famous? :wink: I would love to review your work. What type of genre of writing do you do, anyway? You're not the only ...

KJ- Whoa. That did not just happen. Oh my god! That did just happen. Man, this story is getting intense and intenser every moment. I just love it. I have ...

KJ- Oh. Oh. Oh!! I'm really lovin' Vick's character. Now the situation from New York, is that somewhat in the present too? -- Okay, don't listen to me. I might ...

KJ- Wow another amazing chapter! I knew that the football scene would pop up. You know, I never knew that Becca had a brother. James. Okay, there's something going on ...

KJ- Uh. What happened to the football game? Or has that haven't happened yet? “I’ll never let you go, Rebecca Chapman.” I love how you incorporate these small sentences of ...

KJ- First off, Congrats Becca!! It's so cool that she got the scholarship. Yeah, I agree with everyone else, here. If Sheldon was looking/glancing at Ann she wouldn't be calling ...

KJ- Whoa. This almost gave me a fright when the door ranged. You think it was him but it wasn't just a boy, instead. I was wondering why you used ...

KJ- Oh. Oh. Oh!! I just love this story. I didn't get to say this in the other chapters, because I forgot, but you do an excellent way of going ...

KJ- Man, she does have a hard time at school. Especially with those two girls and those Gothic girls. Ouch. Now, there's something about Vick that wants me to know ...

KJ- Whoa, I think I can totally guess what's going to happen. But I like to see if my guess is wrong. Again, like I said in the first chapter...excellent! ...

KJ- Intriguing. Eye Catching. And just wonderful. This first chapter has grabbed me in and makes me want to read the next part. The emotions flow throughout the story, descriptions ...

Clo- Awww, thanks. What you said means a lot. For the nitpicks, I will work on them when I have the time today. So thanks for pointing those out for ...

I know I'm already writing something but I decided to do something else while doing my other work. I'm going to be posting dreams that I have every time I ...

Mutant- Hey, welcome to the family! :D I hope you have a wonderful time here. I would love to read your short stories. Any genres that your stories fall into? ...