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Re: Mostly Here to Critique
*Orchestrate~ Hey! I see you have been welcomed, already. Cool. 8) Well, Welcome!!! When you say you love literary works , what do you mean? The classics? I do have ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- One
*ashleylee~ Here are some comments when I read this chapter... 1) Carmen and crew ~ He acts like a helpful but annoying older brother. It's like he's there for you ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: -Inconcessus- Preface
*ashleylee~ Here are some comments when I read this preface... 1) Title. I absolutely love the new title. But the thing is, if everyone saw the title to this story, ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: The Elemental Gem
An old woman sat in a rocking chair with her hands in her lap, rocking back and forth. Okay, this a straight out tell. Describe about the rocking chair. And ...
Jan 8, 2009 -
Re: The Rogue ~ Two
~My readers, I thank you for the helpful and supportive criticism you have gave me. Enjoy, reading!~ Chapter Two Lady Amelia slightly turned her head to the left as she ...
Jan 7, 2009 -
Re: Miss Adrianna Barker- 2
*naturesgirl~ What?! That's it? That's the end? Sad. Sad. Sad. :( Well, I guess my thoughts were wrong. I truly wanted Adrianna to be happy with Landon (well mostly him) ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Miss Adrianna Barker- 1
*naturesgirl~ Wow. This is beautifully written! I loved every moment of it. It was like this story was written many, many years ago. Like a classic, you know. I love ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: The Rogue ~ One
* Roo ~ Thank you for taking your time to read this chapter. I appreciate it greatly. Thank you everyone else! I have took all nit-picks and revised and edited ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: Hey hey hey, everyone!!!! I'm newbie here lol.
*Midnight Bliss~ First off, cool name. I likey! Welcome. Welcome. Welcome!! :D Any favorites? Like the others mentioned. I saw that you posted something in the historical fiction tab. Just ...
Jan 6, 2009 -
Re: The Rogue ~ One
* KikiSaysRAWR! ~ Thank you for saying this chapter is vivid. The question that you have asked will be answered in or throughout the story. * Angel of Death ~ ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
This is my family's Christmas picture. That's me in the white jacket. This is the most recent one of me. Goodness, I need to work on taking better pics. :roll: ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Post Your Pic Here [6]
* KikiSaysRAWR! ~ Wow. :shock: I love the hair! You know I think my hair is the same length, too. * CastlesInTheSky ~ Yeah, doesn't everybody have problems with frizzy-ness. ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: The Rogue ~ One
* Night Mistress ~ Thanks. I hope the plot is thickening. Okay, the parent thing will definitely come up in the next chapter. Promise. :wink: No!! I'm making this to ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: The Rogue ~ One
~Please read the prologue first. Enjoy, reading!~ This chapter is revised. Chapter One Fall 1815 Dry, crisp leaves of several colors fell down from the decaying trees, onto the bronze-touched ...
Jan 5, 2009 -
Re: Hey, Hi, Yo.
*DeeLoli~ Hey! Welcome. :D It's really cool to see another eighteen year old on this site. I never really see a lot of them. It's most of the youngsters. Do ...
Jan 4, 2009
