Merricat

I love when people use period dialect for period stories, but some of your usages are ... a little odd? The phrase "ye babe’s toy in thy crib", for instance ...

Is the weather an important plot point (the scientists' experiments are going to get flooded and stop working properly, causing havoc) or simply a way of setting the mood? If ...

It might be a good idea to look at what kind of villains you've got already and see if there are any gaps you're missing -- if you've got a ...

First things first: You can write pretty much anything in the first draft, because going back and revising is always an option. The important thing is to just get started. ...

It sounds like it's a solution with a lot of potential. Your instinct that a 15 year old is unlikely to kill the antagonist is spot-on, and if it leads ...

I rarely write them, but I love characters who are genuinely good people -- Rose from New Who, for instance (and the Doctor, but he has a much darker side), ...

Hiya! There's an awful lot to read here and I only got through the first chapter, so my comments ONLY apply to the first chapter. That means that I may ...

Hello, DL! I'm also new, and also on the older side of things, so it's a pleasure meeting you.

Duotrope is a website that lists tons and tons of short fiction and poetry markets. You should find plenty of options there.