Merkava120

Thanks! It's not just your reading, the guards were confusing me even while I wrote them. The one that stayed back did seem suspicious, but I realized that he had ...

Made me think of Inside Out, too! Even though I haven't seen it yet.

Just in case you didn't know (if you did, ignore me) -- you can make a quote by using brackets [] with 'quote' and '/quote' in them. Like this. I ...

Whew sorry, that was a bit long

I'll definitely let you know! (If I do continue it, that is.)

Hahaha thanks a bunch for the review! Heck, maybe I will continue this...I didn't think I would, but..hmmm... Yeah, jihad Buddhists is a bit strange. I thought about putting Allah ...

Thanks a ton! That's a lot of really good feedback that I can use now. I'm not too sure if I'll continue writing with this story but if I do ...

Thanks for the feedback!