Mercyemptyinme

Unbreakable Alone in the world, The old oak tree, growing apart from the rest, A forgotten existence. Its leaves, a green oasis of faded memories, And its bark, shattered hopes ...

oh why thankyou :] i definitely meant aa. as in for car insurance. maybe it's an english thing xx Oh haha oops :smt053 That's really funny though :smt001

This is a really sweet poem :) I think it's been said many times already, but this is a very clever poem. At first I thought the poem was from ...

Hi Solvalery, I love the pictures, they're very beautiful, but unfortunately they're fuzzy. Was it a digital camera you used or a manual camera? I'm guessing it was digital, so ...

Hi there Rosalie, First off I want to say that I absolutely loved this story :) I think you're right about all the heavy stuff that we focus on, and ...

Retrodisco, I didn't know what to expect when I read this or that it would be about someone you lost, but I've read it multiple times now :smt001 The emotions ...

Thank you for reading my poem and commenting :smt001 You know, I thought for a long time about that beginning line and whether I should use "grew" or "grow" and ...

Hey! I'm glad you posted this, I've been waiting for it :smt001 Here are a couple quick grammar mistakes that happened when you were typing this up: how can know ...

Thank you Misamiera and Inkwell for reading my poem :smt001 I'm glad you liked it and that it could convey the feelings I wanted it to.

Thank you to everyone who took the time to read my poem, it means a lot. Ok, here goes a long one: Yuriiko: Thank you so much for your comment, ...

This poem is short, sweet, and absolutely wonderful. I loved every bit of it, and like Mizz, I think the first four lines are the best. They pulled me in, ...

I've read a lot of lyrics from people I know, and I've just had to smile and say they were great, but for these lyrics I can sincerely say :smt001 ...

I love the journey from with yourself that this poem follows. I will say that I'm more interested now to understand what brought about this "new you." Maybe that would ...

While I do think this poem would be good without all the "I carry" lines, I think it is still good now and I understand that you were mimicking a ...

I think this is probably my favorite poem that you've written so far (that I've read anyway) because it really makes me think. I do agree that you should experiment ...