Meow

I agree with Eraquio, this piece, at times, does seem a little bit forced. Also, though I like the idea of trying to open the book in the middle of ...

Let the rain fall down, falling, falling, And wash upon the shore. Let it move up in the stream And travel a new earth. Let it see the dragons in ...

I really liked this. Other than some nitpicky things like the rhythm, it was and is really good. Steps; blocks of concrete stone. Steps; on which I wait alone. Nice ...

I really liked this, I think you really captured the essence of the seasons in the poem. Maybe if you had gone on to Autumn and Spring using the same ...

I read this and really liked it! Okay, here's some of the problems: Mood: Personification: I liked your symbolism with the rabbit and the wolf. It made quite a lot ...

Pretty good! I can't think of anything wrong with this story other than those mentioned above, and overall, it's a great story! Well, keep writing!

**Don't worry about it** "I guess everybody needs some fresh air every once in a while," said the boy. "Well, I'm going back to bed. I have school tomarrow. You ...

Note: *lightbulbs* - Meow did this because Meow wasn't sure whether or not it should be "lightbulbs" or "gaslights". Meow was thinking that maybe it should be gaslights, but Meow ...

He swatted her arm, then made his way to the bathroom. He decided that he would have a cold bath so that his sister would have more hot water, and, ...

This is the beginning of the story...just the first few chapters...mmmm, don't know if Meow likes it or not... The boy stared up at the sky, wondering. Who am I? ...

Meow's favorite part? Creating her own world and escaping the dreadful horror of everyday life. In Meow's world, every day is an adventure and you never know what will happen ...

Hi! Meow's new here!!! Wanna be partners?

thanks everyone! Sorry but Meow's grammer is not that good and this is Meow's first time writing a book. Thank you for the comments though. Meow will work on it ...

Well it seems Meow is wanted! *curtsies* You seem quite the hysterical character. You'll fit right in! ^^ By the way, Yinlin, Meow's been wondering... Are you another major HP ...

chapter 1 It was light outside, despite the time, and Lief Olson couldn't sleep. It wasn't the heat, though that probably had something to do with it. It wasn't the ...