Mel

I'm so excited, I don't know what to do, ya'll. I had planned to write some long thing about this, but I don't really want to anymore. *squee* I'm pregnant! ...

So I've been told. :wink: TPBM comes on here more than they're allowed or suppose to. ^^

Name three objects all in relation. Ex. "Dark, black, fudge." (they all relate) Combine the first TWO letters of all three words. Ex. "Dablfu." (pronounced: Dah-bull-foo) Now put it in ...

Yes. Woo! *party* TPBM has a pet snake.

Thanks bunches for reading and critting my story, you guys, it was much appreciated. Now I suppose I should go back and answer the few questions you guys had and ...

Style

Very short first chapter, yes I know, but it's just an intro. The next will be longer. Read, crit, and enjoy!! --------- -----------------------------Prologue------------------------------------ Two s

Agreeing with what was said before, I do think you rushed this just a little bit and there could have been a bit more description. The overall idea so far? ...

Oh yes. Disturbing indeed! But very well done. You have your detail and description polished, but I don't really connect with your dialogue. It just doesn't seem like the way ...

Awww. It's so cute! ^_^ I've had three of those before. Two dogs: Tommy and Tammy. A monkey: Moe moe. *plays with your llama* We have such a connection; I ...

*shuns you* And that's right, buddy, you better cross those words out. *growls* Fear huh? Psycho huh? *nods* I'll remember that when you're puppy eyeing me, looking for me to ...

Hello hello hello. :D I am Melissa, known as Mel every now and then. I've been called Lissa, Lis, Lisa, Melly Mel, Smelly Melly, Melly, Melly elly, Mee, and Leese. ...