Megrim

Onward we go! I keep getting mixed messages about whether or not a lady lives in that house. She seems to appear sometimes, and then not be mentioned at all ...

Maybe I'm too tired today or something, but I don't have much to say about this chapter. I liked the glimpse into Eliza's head. Just as I was thinking there ...

Jumping right in here! Typing as I read, fyi. I would love to know more about the house and what to picture. I'm defaulting to Victorian England style manor, but ...

My first thoughts jumping into this chapter is that you could do more with your setting. I know we've already had some description of the house, but tell me more ...

The pace slows down a lot in this chapter, as we start out with her recovering and sitting at home being bored. Characters being bored tends to lead to readers ...

Hi again! Megrim here with not much going on today so let's see how much I can get through! For this one, I'm going to take it one section at ...

Hi Junel! Finally here as requested, and at your behest, the evil editor is coming out to chomp on your poor novel. >:) As such, I'm going to type as ...

Ah, I saw this in the green room and almost reviewed in on review day! But it mystified me a little bit so I stayed away from it... I guess ...

Onward we go, and in this chapter we get some interesting characterization and backstory. Both Vajrasha and Do'amha have strong personalities and quirks, making them distinct and memorable. Karliah is

This one was a bit shorter than usual! Here we're seeing the consequences of the high-paced action in the previous chapters, and getting some timely backstory from Paula. Hilda hints ...

The house really reminds me of 1313 Mockingbird Lane heheheh. I got a kick out of that. Ok so final judgment on the chapter: not pulling its weight. It needs ...

Finally up to the new stuff, aye?! I'm glad I started back at the beginning, because in all honesty, if I'd started with this chapter instead, I think I'd be ...

You've got a fantastic opening for a novel in this chapter. I can already imagine how cool it could be. Schadel gets some mystery to solve, Claire helps out, and ...

Hi there! I saw the later chapter in the green room so figured I'd read from the start to get myself up to speed. I won't go too in depth ...

Hi there! Megrim here cruising through the green room for review day, looking for unusual things that haven't gotten much love. And this is definitely unusual. The title grabbed me, ...