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Re: Pitch Feedback
Reiner’s spent his whole life working to get a Councilman’s mask seared forever onto his face — until he’s given one final test, and realises getting his little brother away ...
Apr 19, 2017 -
Re: What Do You Look For in a Main Character?
Tough women and soft men, is my short answer. For example, super awesome female characters I love include Suzan Ivanova, Jadzia Dax, River Song, Debra Morgan (Dexter's sister), and Dana ...
Feb 16, 2017 -
Re: We Need Diverse Books & Own Voices
Diversity! My favorite subject. I already tended to write LGBT or disabled leads as my top two preferences for protags, and I always thought it would be a hindrance, eg ...
Dec 8, 2016 -
Re: Let's talk about romantic subplots...
I love romance. I notice I get extra invested in characters when I'm rooting for them to get together. I think a big issue with romance in general is that ...
Nov 19, 2016 -
Re: Do you prefer past or present tense?
I write in past tense. I try different tenses and POVs for my flash fiction, and it's kinda fun, there are some merits to other ways of doing it, but ...
Nov 19, 2016 -
Re: What makes a story worth telling?
A little late to the party here, but a really interesting question! I couldn't resist. I think there are a few possible answers. 1. Change. Characters that grow and affect ...
Nov 10, 2016 -
Re: Megrim's Elevator Pitch Workshop
Introduction Welcome to Megrim's elevator pitch workshop, where I can help you hone your one-sentence description to catch people's attention. This is helpful for your own understanding of the story, ...
Sep 13, 2016 -
Re: Critique game - first three sentences of your novel/story
@CandyWizard Sentence 1: There's a lot of debate over whether it's okay to start with dialogue or not. The major drawback is that there's no context. I think dialogue openings ...
Aug 30, 2016 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
5/10. It's kinda intriguing, but it's vague and doesn't actually give any info or context. I think it's too gimmicky for me. --- Iari drew a shaky breath and checked ...
Jul 11, 2015 -
Re: Title Feedback
So many cool titles in this thread! Hmm I'm not a big fan of the intentionally strangely spelled words. I could imagine this going really well with a dark fantasy ...
Jul 3, 2015 -
Re: Rate the first sentence above you
Hmm, 3/10. I took off an extra point for the typo :P I know, I'm a harsh critic :S Two similes in a row, and it feels a bit overburdened ...
Jun 14, 2015
