Megrim

Considering it's fantasy, I think you're safe no matter what you choose, because at some point you'll always hit the "the impossible part is explained by magic / suspension of ...

You have a great set-up, and now you just need an idea of where to take things. Like the above posters mentioned: conflict! Basically, you have the starting point, the ...

I suppose this topic is a bit old now and I'm mainly repeating what other people already said, but I think when you work on a story "too long," a ...

I think the concept is very original and cool! The way it's described/written is kind of wordy, though. I generally try to keep paragraphs of description as small as possible, ...

I'll drop a quick post since I haven't found time to go through this thoroughly, but want to chime in. It's a fun coincidence this came up, because in my ...

Megrim is on the Squills team?

Y is probably more interesting. I noticed you didn't mention Y very much in the outline--sounds like Y is in need of some interesting backstory, too.

Round 2 in 15 minutes:

Argh, I think WFP crashed on us. Trying to reconnect.

Round 1:

Round 1 would be in 2 hours. Does anyone want to do that one or are all the takers coming to round 2?

Ok finished Shadowsong and onto Atana!

@jumpingsheep We meant both of those to be on Sat, so that should be the 17th for round 2 as well.

Someone has been reading Call of Cthulu.... ...who, me?

My brain is dying. For some reason I keep getting stuck, inching through the CP one sentence at a time. The creativity well is a bit dry. I blame work; ...