Megrim

I voted for hippocampus because it's the most original and sounds like a lot of fun. Angels and demons are super overdone and tired imo, so those ones automatically turned ...

Ever start writing something only to find yourself going way longer or way shorter than intended? That "short story" keeps up momentum into 25k+ words, while your grand "novel" fizzles ...

All set with everything posted so far. Ready for more victims.

Descriptions are a finnicky thing. You need just enough to make the story feel alive, but any more than that and it bogs everything down like lead weights in your ...

Introduction Ideas are cheap. You may have heard that, but if you're like me it may not have really sunk in yet. Some writers are overflowing with stories and characters, ...

SOUND ENTERS THE CRUCIBLE! (@soundofmind) Organization: 5/5 Looks good to me, particularly how each point is separated and discussed separately. Using the quotes helps break up the review visually, an

LIGHTSONG ENTERS THE CRUCIBLE! (@Lightsong) Organization: 3/5 The paragraphs have a logical flow, if you think about it, but it wasn't immediately obvious. I like that it starts out with ...

AJ ENTERS THE CRUCIBLE! (@ajruby12) Organization: 5/5 The bullet points make this review very easy on the eyes, and also easy to return to check something quickly. They're split up ...

Megrim's Critique Crucible Think you have the reviewing skillz? Feeling pretty good about your approach to reviewing, and want the rug pulled out from under you? Feeling pretty bad about ...

REOPENING TO REVIEW REQUESTS. There is no maximum to the number of people who can request at a time, but there's also no guarantees of a deadline from me. I'll ...

Reiner’s spent his whole life working to get a Councilman’s mask seared forever onto his face — until he’s given one final test, and realises getting his little brother away ...

if i don't get a reply by the end of may i might as well cancel the project. Why?

Okay, then, looks like we'll call the contest today instead of going into the last round. Since Mea is voluntarily withdrawing, that leaves @PrincessInk as the last contestant going forward, ...

All right, we're moving into the last round! Right now there are only 2 upvotes, for the same story. Remember that you can still upvote even if you've been knocked ...

Sorry to hear that. Good luck!