MeganWeaver

I really like the emotions you have presented in this poem. It shows the true side and it's put simply. My only criticism is that this line It’s not fair ...

Educated, and slutty She’s half dressed not funny, And always says something, in most conversions Coz she’s got her foot in everyone’s faces And we pay for everything, She’s just ...

Silence lingered in the midst of the ocean, The waves crashed undetected. The mist settled on its chaotic surface, Portraying a masquerade to the sky, That stood obliviously above it, ...

Thank you :] I will deffinately take this into consideration. I tend to go a bit over the top with big words and I know I don't need to so ...

WOW! I honestly felt every emotion there. I think this is an amazing piece of writing and it deffinately tugged on my heart strings. I really felt for the victim ...

I loved the emotion present in this I think it was communicated well :] My advice would be to lengthen out your lines because it's a very quick read and ...

I love this because it's a poem a lot of people can relate to :D It's very well structured and the detail is great. I don't think I have any ...

Okay, so I've been planning a novel for a while now and I feel like I have got enough information to start. Grabbing the bull by the horns isn't all ...

My advice to you would be follow tigershark17's advice xD also, while you are doing that stuff try saying the story out loud that forms from something random. Like how ...

My english teacher once told me that when I have writers block that "Drawing a picture or brainstorming ideas" is often a good cure. A little obvious maybe but it ...

This drawing in itself is amazing, there are a few technical things that could be tweaked but that will come with practise. Being an artist myself I can really see ...

I think this poem was fantastic! The stanzas I thought were well structured and they were like pieces in a puzzle that fitted perfectly. The imagery was fantastic and the ...

I really liked this, I can relate to it which is what makes it even better. :D I enjoyed your writing style and I think it flowed well. I don't ...

I really liked the form you took on when writing this piece, I feel it really spoke to your audience. However, I would suggest perhaps improving the vocabulary ever so ...

Hello all :D I've recently joined YWS again and I'm really looking forward to conversing with writers such as myself to help me and them improve. Feel free to PM ...