MeganWeaver

The imagery in this is brilliant, I really liked the way you described everything. The rhyming scheme was good too and I liked the way you personified the rose. To ...

I really enjoyed reading this, I'm glad I took the time to. I loved the imagery and the vocabulary I couldn't fault them. The only thing I will say is ...

This was amazing in my opinion, the fact that something so beautiful, like the ribbons, could actually be something as poisonus as a lie is fantastic. It's like when the ...

Wow, this poem is really true to life in some aspects. I love the imagery you used and I think that it was really well written. My only improvement would ...

Thank you tgirly :D I thought I'd put it up because i've recently got the pajamas that have that on xD

Apologies for the delayed replies everyone, I haven't had time to sit on here and do so. tgirly - Thank you for your comment :] I hope you feel the ...

This is a random start to a novel I never finished please tell me if you like it and if I was silly to stop writing it. Also any comments ...

I really liked this poem as it seems to be very true to a lot of frindships, the only thing I'd like to say is that you have made a ...

Thanks for your comment :] I agree they are pretty huge, its just the settings on my computer, they're a nightmare xD When they are smaller they look better :]

These are just random pictures I took but I think they are quite artistic :] IMAG0652.jpg IMAG0644.jpg Please Comment with your opinions on my photography skills :]

This is a well written poem I believe, however, you used the word "now" four times in the first six lines. I think perhaps re wording this a little would ...

I totaly agree with MiRaCLeS there are so many other adjectives to describe the sea other than the ones you have used. I too feel that nice is a really ...

Thank you Deanie :] I understand your criticism however the original was a song and so I have followed the structure it used but I have changed the words. :] ...

I loved this poem :] It was really light and descriptive, my only criticism would be that the first stanza is written with alternative rhyme but the rest isn't. I ...

Hmm, that sounds like a good idea :] Thanks again. You're really helpful :D Perhaps I will try writing it as if I was telling the story then add in ...