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Re: Prologue: Harlem's Run
It didn't take long for the time to collapse when I heard the fast approaching foot-steps climb up the stairs and formed a shadow at my door. The air was ...
Dec 16, 2008 -
Re: Having a problem refining an idea into a story.
I would suggest more planning. decide who the main characters are, the idea you are trying to get across to the reader and what events you are sure you want ...
Nov 23, 2008 -
Re: To get a novel published?
What steps do you need to take to get your novel published, or submit it to be published?
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: New Storyline =P
The Story of What if Road -based on a true story-: 3 best friends were on a 2 mile walk to one of their house. As they came near the ...
Nov 22, 2008 -
Re: Bloggers?
Hey guys. I was wondering who all on here blogs. I blog on xanga. we-hee. soo Share your blogs!
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: High School Freshmen
Proud Freshman of 2012. And screw the Mayans. I don't believe in any of that. its BS.and makes me very angery.. tehe.
Nov 2, 2008 -
Re: Rose Petals...
Its a nice start, let me know if you write more.
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: As if I was in Love 1 (edited)
hmm. i enjoyed it, let me know when you write more.
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: This Poem is Me
its very nice and simple. besides for what they said, I think that its nothing really special. You didn't deliver anything thats exceptionally good, but its not bad either. Just ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: Angry.
I think what you need to do is tell a story. Why are you angry? instead of just listing what your doing when your angry, describe the senorio, the situation. ...
Nov 1, 2008 -
Re: Show me you care
"Show me you Care" What are we doing Just waiting around I can't get over The sweet old sound That once made my heart thump now trembling with pain I ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Wistful Thinking
I think you should develope this into a story. Very neat Idea. orginal. And well thought through. It makes me ask questions like, Why doesn't this girl know about the ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: He's not quite ready
That was actually really cool. ITs nice to see the roles flipped and the boy be concerned about making their first special. I wanna guy like that =P. Its also ...
Oct 27, 2008 -
Re: Continueous stories
the evidence of this past marks his body permanently. The stories of his scars...
Oct 26, 2008 -
Re: My name is Megan:
Hey! My name is Megan. I'm 14 years old. I'm very down to earth I wouldnt consider myself to be so typical. But who knows, maybe everyone else thinks they ...
Oct 26, 2008
