MeganJ2012

Ok, a while back I posted a storyline that seemed well liked among people but I changed a few major details and I wanted to go over them with you ...

Okay so here's my new idea I've been trying to develope for a while. It's just a brief summary. An overly confident football player finds himself love strucken by the ...

Wow that's complicated. I think it would be interesting to read but your getting really close to the uglies triology by scott westerfield. I would try to twist it in ...

If it makes any difference about the Romeo and Juliet idea, The characters are stating exactly your opinion. Corey believes that Romeo just wanted to get with Juliet and shes ...

I have this idea I'm really excited about which I would like your opinion on. I'm really bummed though because I'm having some major writing block. Seriously, I've been kind ...

Okay, so I got my storyline all together. My character's are all personified. I thought about it for a long long time. I'm pretty much set to start writing ,but ...

I want to know what its like to be in a foster home. I want to know their life story. I want to know everything. I want to know how ...

Hey I attached the story. Please Please Please Review! A quick summary about what the story will be about is;; Two people with a really strong bond. (not lovers but ...

* = spelling/grammer. Strikeouts = words that are not needed. [suggestions] = in otherwords, What I would do. -blah blah blah- Whats I'm thinking as a reader. I lay in ...

I did a double post somehow and I don't know how to delete it so sorryyy.

My mom's tears soaked my brand new Ed Hardy Shirt. I rolled my eyes as she set her head once again on my shoulders and pressed into me. I gave ...

"She was scared, shocked, and in pain." Maybe you should find a way to show us that she was scared, shocked and in pain. For example, If your scared, some ...

My moms tears soaked my brand new Ed Hardy Shirt. I rolled my eyes as she set her head once again on my shoulders and pressed into me. I gave ...

Caitlen finally burst into tears. The intensity of the room became to much. After a few mintures, Cailten stared up at Josh's bewildered eyes. "It..It.. was you."

Radio- What can I say? I miss the smile on your face. What can I do? I already told you the truth, I miss you. and all that we've been ...