MegaShine2604

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I love the tension and emotion you put into this. I think it's an outstanding peice. I love how I could vision the emotion you were feeling. I love how ...

I understand what you are trying to say but I think you should add a little bit more detail. I understand the emotion you have but I think you could ...

I find this very good. I liked the description and vocabulary and how everything was structured into place. Bullet For My Valentine is a good band and you made a ...

I find this very touching.. No Person should be raped or touched in such a manor that do not want to be touched. I liked how you gave details and ...

I think it's time for somebody to actually come out and say this What the hell is going on with our world.. You walk down the hallways in school and ...

Imagine how many people have died over the years People who have served for our country and our rights What if that was you? You only have one chance at ...