Meerkat

Hey, CodyKnight! It's Meerkat, back for part two. Grammar, spelling, and word choice: -"Something about the landscape finally struck him" I believe you forgot a period. -"With the yard packed ...

Hey, Laurenh6. I'm here to check out chapter three! Grammar, spelling, and word choice: -"Some, could even be monsters." You don't need a comma here. -"Especially, in the dark." Same ...

Hey, Laurenh6. Meerkat here to review! Syntax, word choice, and conventions: -"The silent hallway was illuminated by a lantern, its flame flickering silently..." You repeat the word "silent" here. -"L

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Hey, Laurenh6. Meerkat here to review! Syntax, word choice, and conventions: -"The silent hallway was illuminated by a lantern, its flame flickering silently..." You repeat the word "silent" here. -"L

Hi, Laurenh6. It's Meerkat stopping by for a review. Just a couple notes on spelling, grammar, word choice, and all that jazz: -There are several run-ons in the chapter that ...

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Accidental double post, please ignore.

Hello, Maricore. It's Meerkat, reviewing as per your request. Grammar and spelling: To be honest, there are quite a lot of grammar and spelling mistakes in this chapter. Before you ...

Hi, yizhongt. It's Meerkat reviewing like you asked. Thanks so much for your patience; I don't know how I missed your request. Anyway, let's get started! Grammar and spelling: -"The ...

Hey, BlackhawkUnder. Meerkat here to review as per request. Thanks for your patience! Grammar, spelling, and word choice: -"No, it wasn’t Grant’s idea…" Did you mean "Grantos' idea"? -"...neithe

Hey, BlackhawkUnder! Meerkat here to review, like you asked. Grammar, spelling, etcetera: -"It’s destruction had led her to the brick..." There shouldn't be an apostrophe in "Its." -"King Kaenok, st

Hey, BlackhawkUnder. Meerkat here to review, as per request! Grammar, spelling, etc.: -"Towering firs, pines and yew trees..." I don't know how you feel about the Oxford comma, but I'd ...

Hey, BlueJayWalker. Just me stopping in to check out chapter five. Grammar, spelling, word choice, and what have you: -"...short, straight and pale..." Depending on your opinion of the Oxford ...

Hiya, BlackhawkUnder. Let's get right to it! Grammar, spelling, word choice, and random notes: -"...salt and pepper colored hair..." An adjectival phrase like this one needs hyphens, as in "salt-and-p

Hi, there! It's Meerkat here to review. I think InfiniteRectangles covered a lot on the punctuation front already, but here are some edits regarding spelling, grammar, and such. -When you ...

Hello, BlackhawkUnder! It's Meerkat back for chapter 4.1. Grammar, spelling, and word choice: -"Daren’s eyes flashed open to face the bright, morning light..." The comma between "bright" and "mornin