Medusa

Wow. Before I read this, I recommend correct paragraphing. A new speaker requires a new paragraph--see your first two lines. Also be careful with your capitalization--only words at the beginning ...

I have only critted the first section, due to my lack of time and energy at the present. I will be back. First, some nit-picky things: He made himself to ...

You guys are crazy. Thank you all! -takes a sip of redbull- WINGS! J--I do write many stories so, it's all good :]

Thanks for the colorful welcome. I chose Medusa because Medusa is my favorite legendary character, as well as my future tattoo.

sensual narcotics I live on a vicodin life-style and my soul is a psychotic thing; sensual, erotic, a pubescent void. My emotions swing on a pendulum of fine fire; beautifully ...

Be careful with this sort of poem--I have read many, and written a few myself, poems that attempt to be either cute or clever by writing about not being able ...

Thank you Alainna! I'm glad you think so.

Let me tell you my favorite bit to begin with: groans as the product of suburban rebellion grinds along his metatarsal bones with snaking wires bleeding from their ears. On ...

Hello, I am the Medusa. I was born and bred in the sonoran desert, and I am sixteen years old, my favorite age to be so far. I have indeed ...