MeadowLark

Heya dancingclouds! I'm going to review this for you. Changes are in bold, comments are in italics and spelling mistakes are underlined. I'm reviewing your piece in a way I'm ...

Heya! Haha! A great picture. Some things I want to point out (ignoring the Tiger's arm). 1) The first two cats look like mice. 2) The big red kitty reminds ...

Heya Saph! “Um… Why is the Queen coming over here?” Serenity asked, panic showing on her face. Panic is showing on her face, eh? Well, you could elaborate on that. ...

Hey Pippie! Thanks for the PM! “Esme! we were just discussing how to proceed.” Zahra broke the quiet, as welcoming as ever. We needs to be capitilized. Also, the period ...

I have lots of cute kitties ^_^ TPBM loves music.

Banned for having a sword in your avatar.

Lilymoore, sorry about your pet rat. It is rather cute...for a rodent >_< Texan! Awesome cat! I love the colour of his coat! So many cute pets!! I want them ...

Wrestling

9/10 I don't know. It just sounds so...peaceful and unique ^_^

I do. Not as much as I used to but I still do xD TPBM has way to much fun on YWS.

Banned for having a cigarette in your avatar.

Heya there! Sorry it took so long, I have a tendecy to forget which stories I've begun reading xD Alright, to the review. I was hog-tied on the dungeon floor, ...

Heya Raimunda!! I have to say this before I start any kind of review: Awesome picture! It's soo realistic. Ahem, now forwards! Hair: The hair is so realistic. You did ...

How has YWS changed me ? Hmm, I know my writing has defiantly improved. I now use a critical eye when I'm writing, answer all those why and who cares ...

Hey there! I've never heard of this "Cowboy Bebop" before but I read the poem anyways. Not good at critiquing poetry but I noticed one thing: Till that one god ...