MeadowLark

8/10 I like the colour--although it's a little hard to see--and I love the words.

Heya there! Me again. I must say, this is a wonderful second draft! Really. But still, I have a few nitpicks. I had a broken bones, stitches in four different ...

I read the poem and it wasn't bad. It was actually very interesting. It had an fascinating theme. But Galerius pointed out some interesting things. I wrote a poem and ...

I agree with Bolt. Everything is there. My tip: Just write. It will develop more than you think it will. All stories start out as little clips of major events ...

The Bronze Bow I don't know who the author is but I did not like that book. I thought it was very boring and kinda dumb. I also read a ...

I love the Inkheart Trilogy! They have got to be some of my favourite books to read. Cornelia Funke is a wonderful author. A girl in school recommened the book ...

Heya Doodle! Let's see what I can dig up, shall we? A waxy globe hung high in the dark sky that was speckled with little white dots, peeking out from ...

It could have been better! Sebastian was like one of my favourite characters and then..grr! Whose your favourite character(s)? So sorry to hear about your savings. I have troubles saving ...

If I get an idea I just start writing. The characters just come from the top of my head and the more I write on the story, the more developed ...

Heya Worx! Really, I couldn't find anything wrong so I think I'll comment on a few things. The first draft--though it was good--was nothing compared to this. This is a ...

Me no good at poetry so please bear with me. I had to write a poem for school about work and this is what I got. Rip it apart if ...

9/10 Loved the first two cause they're so true!

Heya Saph! So sweet to know more about you ;) So how's the violin saving going? Haha, you'll get one don't worry. It may take awhile but you'll eventually get ...

Heya Saph! Sorry it took so long. Been busy. Ahem, now onto the review! This is the third in a series and I hope that it's better than the first ...

Hey congrats Blues!! Everyone did their best and can't wait till the next war! Hopefully I'll be able to participate more ;)